In this weekend’s challenge, we are given 33 words and told to add 33 more.
Sound familiar? Yes, this prompt took me back to where it all began, so so why not use the opportunity to take the story a little further. Just a little.
TFX’s words are in italics, my words are bolded.
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The last strains of sunlight lingered in the corners, grasping every available point of refraction. She slid her fingertips along the glass wondering if this was all there ever was. Or could be.
Carly looked past the cracked window as Allen walked into the sunset alone. One way or another, he was gone. She turned so the camera wouldn’t see the tear. The show was over.
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Brain Tomahawk 
awwwww….so sad. I love your take on it. A move? Well done!
Mine is here
Have you an AWESOME WEEKEND!
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shakira
Great take on the prompt. Read the older story too 🙂
Thanks- i hope you are getting into the story 🙂
Awww! A very emotional ending.
I wkll get into more detail in the next installment – it will explain everything!
it’s not over yet 😉
This is a perfect ending. And the cracked window is a perfect detail. Nicely done!
Thanks for the read and comment!
“She turned so the camera wouldn’t see the tear. The show was over.” Love it. Great job, BT.
Thank you!
“The show was over” makes me sad! I HATE goodbyes!
No worries- the story hasnt ended…not as long as the zombunnies are still around!
Aw. I’m looking forward to the elaboration in the next installment!
I will be sure to cover it 🙂
Such a sad moment. I hope you don’t wait so long between installments 🙂
Yes, I needed to write just a little to get that fire started up again. New installment sooner than later 😉
Wow this is was so great! 😀 Really powerful piece of writing 😀
Well thank you! Its nearing the end of the Zombie Bunnies story – take some time to catch up if you’re interested 🙂
“The show was over.” Does that mean that the cameras will be off of them at last and they have no more need to hide their true selves?
Well the show MIGHT be over, yes the cards are shown, and things are coming to a head. More will come soon! 😉
That should be interesting – reality playing itself out for real. 😉